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 The Black Hole, Chapter Three

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PostSubject: The Black Hole, Chapter Three   The Black Hole, Chapter Three EmptySun Dec 28, 2008 5:03 pm

Chapter 3: Burst of Evil

...and so, he set out on his adveture; no one to protect him, nothing to live on. Only a bow, arrow, and clothes. Crickets were chirping in the dark sky, thinking that it is nighttime. Well, they are wrong by 12 hours. It is noon, and Rick thought and though of what he'll do. His herat was beating 5x faster than a beat of a drum roll. He thought... and he changed his name to Grimlow.

After night and day, he set out without talking. He didn't need it; it was a waste of breath. that's because he saw no humans. It is as if he were a cloud, floating above the lava, evading every piece of volcanic heat. But he wasn't. He was burning his legs, skipping in and across it, to find a clue of existence. But after hours and hours, he stopped and climbed deep into a tree where no lava went. He looked at his legs. Burned. He had to use his hands to crawl across it. But then he would have no hands. So he thought again. He looked at the tree, then a rope. That's where his plan began.

He tied the rope to one end of the tree to another. He flinged it, and he flew away, farther to the volcano.

MEANWHILE

Larry: Haha, that dork fell for years of his life into a trap.
Narrator: He had captured every human except Grimlow to try to make him fall into lava more easily.
Larry: I will take over the world!
Voice: Ahem...
Larry: Oh!.... ah... boss... I meant we are going to take over the world!
Voice: Flirm, use your evil voice at all times.
Larry: Alright, fine, I'll fake my name back to my real name.
Voice: Flirm, throw all the people into the electric volcano. NOW!
Flirm: Yes sir...
Voice: And by the way...
Flirm: What?
Voice: As a token of your reward, I will make you a promotion...
Flirm: A PROMOTION!? Oh, THANK YOU! I have never had a single one from yo--
Voice: Nonsense. This will be a good reward, trust me.
Flirm: Alright.
Voice: Put this hankerchief on...
Flirm: Alright. (Putting on hankerchief...)
Voice: Ok... Lavana! Surge! Riste! Tke him away into the volcano!
Flirm: Booooooooooos!! You can't do this! This is an outrage---
Lavana: Shut up, Flirt!
Flirt: My name is not Fliiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiirrrrrt..... (Burns in volcano)

So they burn all people and Flirm by the volcano. This outrageous part of the tale is nothing compared to the burst of speechlessness and evil coming ahead of the story...

END OF CHAPTER THREE
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PostSubject: Re: The Black Hole, Chapter Three   The Black Hole, Chapter Three EmptySun Dec 28, 2008 5:12 pm

Yeah, another confusing chapter...I mean like uh if you walked in lava, wouldn't you melt away at the seems? And who is Flirm? Why are they burning people? Why isn't he at school? @_@
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PostSubject: Re: The Black Hole, Chapter Three   The Black Hole, Chapter Three EmptySun Dec 28, 2008 5:15 pm

It's fiction, and he GRAUATED!!! So it mean he has SUMMER BREAK! Remember from chapter one?


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PostSubject: Re: The Black Hole, Chapter Three   The Black Hole, Chapter Three EmptySun Dec 28, 2008 6:25 pm

5 feet away from lava would burn even with a very protective suit.
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PostSubject: Re: The Black Hole, Chapter Three   The Black Hole, Chapter Three EmptySun Dec 28, 2008 7:24 pm

Very nice story.
More chapters!
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PostSubject: Re: The Black Hole, Chapter Three   The Black Hole, Chapter Three EmptyMon Dec 29, 2008 9:02 am

ELECTRIC volcano?
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PostSubject: Re: The Black Hole, Chapter Three   The Black Hole, Chapter Three EmptyTue Dec 30, 2008 4:27 am

Why did Voice throw Flirm into the volcano?
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