| Life Poem I wrote When I was in the 5th grade | |
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Ekat Pink Bender
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| Subject: Life Poem I wrote When I was in the 5th grade Tue Jan 13, 2009 4:15 pm | |
| A non-rhyming poem I made.
Life is a thought, deep in a person's mind. Life is a threat, to a jailer's personality. Life is everything. It doesn't matter what. Life is to not waste time, your time soon will end. Life is a chance; a chance to fulfill your dreams. Life is your only place to show yourself off. Life is your freedom; in this case, your only way out. Life is a kiss from a lip of your dreams. Life is a chance to say anything. Life doesn't mean anything. You can say anything to anyone. Life is a dream-cloud. You dream and you live it. Life is just life; there's no meaning to it.
So why do you wonder about the meaning of life? You're just wasting your life's time. You're not getting a prize, really---
The prize doesn't mean anything, and nor does life. Enjoy it. | |
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Avatarsyd Pink Bender
Number of posts : 573 Age : 28 Username Title : Mistress Of All 4 Elements! Points : Warnings : Strikes : Contribution to the Site : Extra Ranks : User of the week : Registration date : 2008-11-07
| Subject: Re: Life Poem I wrote When I was in the 5th grade Tue Jan 13, 2009 4:20 pm | |
| Huh...not bad for 5th grade. Kinda liked it. Of course, I like rhyming poems better. | |
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Ekat Pink Bender
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| Subject: Re: Life Poem I wrote When I was in the 5th grade Tue Jan 13, 2009 4:22 pm | |
| Well I was bred and made it at the time, I copied it from an old notebook i just found | |
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Avatarsyd Pink Bender
Number of posts : 573 Age : 28 Username Title : Mistress Of All 4 Elements! Points : Warnings : Strikes : Contribution to the Site : Extra Ranks : User of the week : Registration date : 2008-11-07
| Subject: Re: Life Poem I wrote When I was in the 5th grade Tue Jan 13, 2009 4:27 pm | |
| Yeah. When you think about it, that could have won a rpize too in 5th grade. I mean, I was(or is)never a good writer/poet. | |
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Jyo Grasshopper
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| Subject: Re: Life Poem I wrote When I was in the 5th grade Tue Jan 13, 2009 5:31 pm | |
| I dont like non ryming poems, nothin against your poem, just not my taste of writing | |
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JakeSteel Pink Bender
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| Subject: Re: Life Poem I wrote When I was in the 5th grade Tue Jan 13, 2009 6:15 pm | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: Life Poem I wrote When I was in the 5th grade Tue Jan 13, 2009 6:54 pm | |
| Cool. Decent for a fifth grader. I don't like non-rhyming poems, though. |
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Blue Virus Red Monkey
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| Subject: Re: Life Poem I wrote When I was in the 5th grade Tue Jan 13, 2009 8:21 pm | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: Life Poem I wrote When I was in the 5th grade Wed Jan 14, 2009 10:01 am | |
| Like it Kon, Life is like a forest getting smaller everyday because of people! |
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