brassmonkey Bender
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| Subject: Haikus Sun Jan 11, 2009 12:40 am | |
| heres my series of vaguely related haikus
Frothing goes the stream free flowing through the forest like deer in the fields
now 400 years still standing proud in the woods the fir, it lives on
chirping life away flying through the bright blue sky like the age-old wind
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Avatarsyd Pink Bender
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| Subject: Re: Haikus Sun Jan 11, 2009 9:06 am | |
| Uh the 3rd haiku is wrong.... The second line should have 7 syllables, but it has 8.... | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: Haikus Sun Jan 11, 2009 9:08 am | |
| Nice brass monkey like it |
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brassmonkey Bender
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| Subject: Re: Haikus Sun Jan 11, 2009 12:48 pm | |
| ya i wrote throught instead of through by accident, ill fix dat. and thnx jack | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: Haikus Sun Jan 11, 2009 2:00 pm | |
| I don't get these kinda things though lol, |
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NotBunny The Mask
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| Subject: Re: Haikus Fri Aug 21, 2009 5:21 pm | |
| I like haikus Your haiku was great too. | |
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Tensai_Adam Red Kung-Fu Master
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| Subject: Re: Haikus Fri Aug 21, 2009 5:33 pm | |
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