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PostSubject: To Live Without Death   Tue Feb 03, 2009 7:37 pm

A cool poem I made for a cat roleplaying game about a charrie I play that was cursed never to die.

http://lemonlemon74.deviantart.com/art/To-Live-Without-Death-111727925

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PostSubject: Re: To Live Without Death   Tue Feb 03, 2009 7:40 pm

That is ... insane!
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PostSubject: Re: To Live Without Death   Tue Feb 03, 2009 8:13 pm

Tounge This is to all the guys who thinks poems have to rhyme!

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PostSubject: Re: To Live Without Death   Tue Feb 03, 2009 9:35 pm

Tounge To the people that try to make poems without rhyme.
The poem is good, but is more like sentence fragments to me, lol.

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PostSubject: Re: To Live Without Death   Tue Feb 03, 2009 11:00 pm

That wouldn't end up fun. You would have 1,000,000,000,000,000,000,000 kids/wifes and you would see them all die :S That is getting busy!

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PostSubject: Re: To Live Without Death   Wed Feb 04, 2009 1:47 pm

Aww! That was really sad Sad but, yeah, it's awfully good Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: To Live Without Death   Sun Mar 01, 2009 11:45 am

goooooooood
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PostSubject: Re: To Live Without Death   Sun Mar 01, 2009 11:49 am

Looks like you just wrote up a poem with no meaning, although you try to make it seem nobody understands it. Sorry, I didn't like it very much, but it's definately not the worst I've ever seen. And btw, DeviantART is for art, you know that you can post your poem here without having to take an image of it. -_-
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