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 If you listen (A poem)

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PostSubject: If you listen (A poem)   If you listen (A poem) EmptySat Jan 17, 2009 6:08 pm

If you listen

If you listen...
you will hear which way your heart tells you to go.

If you listen...
to the music you hear inside your head good-luck will come your way.

If you listen...
to the people around you, you will hear their thoughts and feelings.

If you listen...
to yourself, the choices you make, and your own mistakes you will learn.

So listen and hear everything you need to know.
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PostSubject: Re: If you listen (A poem)   If you listen (A poem) EmptySat Jan 17, 2009 9:08 pm

Good poem... But if you ask me, it wasn't that much... Poetic... You should use better words, and make your sentences flow more. Good luck. Smile
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