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PostSubject: Haikus   Sun Jan 11, 2009 12:40 am

heres my series of vaguely related haikus

Frothing goes the stream
free flowing through the forest
like deer in the fields

now 400 years
still standing proud in the woods
the fir, it lives on

chirping life away
flying through the bright blue sky
like the age-old wind


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PostSubject: Re: Haikus   Sun Jan 11, 2009 9:06 am

Uh the 3rd haiku is wrong....
The second line should have 7 syllables, but it has 8....
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PostSubject: Re: Haikus   Sun Jan 11, 2009 9:08 am

Nice brass monkey like it
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PostSubject: Re: Haikus   Sun Jan 11, 2009 12:48 pm

ya i wrote throught instead of through by accident, ill fix dat. and thnx jack
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PostSubject: Re: Haikus   Sun Jan 11, 2009 2:00 pm

I don't get these kinda things though lol,
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PostSubject: Re: Haikus   Fri Aug 21, 2009 5:21 pm

I like haikus Very Happy Your haiku was great too.
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PostSubject: Re: Haikus   Fri Aug 21, 2009 5:33 pm

7 month bump D=

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