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PostSubject: Nothing Left 2!!   Fri Jan 02, 2009 6:03 pm

This is the second and last part of the story. This takes place a few years ago after the incident when someone framed him. The guy talking is the person who was intentionally framed. The fellow he is speaking to is the man who framed him. Again, I wrote this many years ago. Btw, there is minor cussing invovled, just a heads up.


Nothing Left 2








Do you remember me, because I remember you


If I had just one penny, I would’ve looked to sue


You don’t even know the pain that I’ve gone through


All the pain you have caused, and my rage is about due


Now that we are both familiar with that day


I have a lot on my mind I want to say


Hoping to bounce back on the great life of high pay


But nothing would ever go my way


Life used to be appreciated; it was at its best


All the weight from my childhood was lifted off my
chest


Now I am all alone, an egg that fell off its nest


And I’m stuck with the druggies, smokin pot and using
meth


I look for food; look for any scraps I can find


Or took food that was not even mine


I don’t got no money, not even a dime


I have no where to go, not even one sign


I looked for any job, but nothing in sight


I can’t even think, and forgot how to write


People laughing at me when the day is bright


Livin In the cold that I can hardly bare at night


I never knew life could have been this hard


Looken at the year after this whole thing started


All I wanted was to help you look towards the stars


But I ended up in that cell looken at those god damn
bars


I miss my family and my wife’s smile


I want them back in my life but I know their in denial


I miss my life, I was ridin in style


But now I can’t cause I have a criminal file


Maybe my life is going through a phase


Trying to get through this confusing maze


Got to get up off my feet and stop playing these games


Just like I have been for the past few days


Maybe my life has always been sore


Thinking of the past, I always wanted more


People delivering shit right to my door


Livin like a star in the mid-ocean floor


I know our lives were never the same


I used to live every day in fame


Flying first class in one of them high powered planes


Never had to suffer any kind of pain


How is it that my life has turned around


Livin in the streets of a small empty town


It might not look as bad as it sounds


But look when its pouring and the thunder pounds


My life is empty, my soul has been devoured


As my body crumbles, and my evil is empowered


All because of you….you fuckin coward


But why would you care, your life has not shattered


Now I spend every day with agonizing pain


Yankin shards of glass right out of my veins


Pealing skin that has already been slain


And those damn insects just drivin me insane
Now its time to go to my destiny
Knowing that I tried and this was meant to be
My grave will not even get one bit of respect

But my life is nothing, I have nothing left.



Yeah, the ending is horrible. XD
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PostSubject: Re: Nothing Left 2!!   Fri Jan 02, 2009 6:18 pm

Wow, another great part. I cried at this one too. But, wow. I'm just like...well I'm kinda lost for words. Lol. But...WOW! Wowza, gosh, this like belongs like in a frame or something! Like WOW! Like totally needs to be in a book or something. Kinda frazzled because of the awe >.<
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PostSubject: Re: Nothing Left 2!!   Fri Jan 02, 2009 6:21 pm

Thank you avatar, I really do not know why I did not publish the story. I am glad you really enjoyed it. I am in awe from your response XD
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PostSubject: Re: Nothing Left 2!!   Fri Jan 02, 2009 7:05 pm

Ah, beautifully written, and very powerful. Very Happy Don't forget to enter it in a contest to win lots of money!

P.S. Avatar you were just talking like me when we were at Edis. =p
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PostSubject: Re: Nothing Left 2!!   Fri Jan 02, 2009 7:25 pm

Very good. I loved it. It's like I was seeing what was happening.
If I could rate this, it would be 100/10. Again, very nice job.
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PostSubject: Re: Nothing Left 2!!   Fri Jan 02, 2009 10:04 pm

Thank you everyone and there are story contests here?
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PostSubject: Re: Nothing Left 2!!   Sat Jan 03, 2009 12:37 am

I don't think so, but, that would be a fantastic idea.
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PostSubject: Re: Nothing Left 2!!   Sat Jan 03, 2009 12:41 am

It would.
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PostSubject: Re: Nothing Left 2!!   Sat Jan 03, 2009 9:17 am

awesomely written jyo, did it take a lot of time?
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PostSubject: Re: Nothing Left 2!!   Sat Jan 03, 2009 10:48 am

omg! that was so good! are you gonna do another one. i rarely cry during movies and poems and stories but this accually almost made me cry!
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PostSubject: Re: Nothing Left 2!!   Sat Jan 03, 2009 10:59 am

haha cool, and thanks, and I dont think there will be another, I mean he dies.
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PostSubject: Re: Nothing Left 2!!   Sat Jan 03, 2009 5:29 pm

Great poem! I feel bad for the person in the poem, nobody will help the guy.

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PostSubject: Re: Nothing Left 2!!   Sun Jan 04, 2009 10:15 am

Again A very great part
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PostSubject: Re: Nothing Left 2!!   Sun Jan 04, 2009 9:07 pm

Thanks
you.
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PostSubject: Re: Nothing Left 2!!   Sun Jan 04, 2009 9:27 pm

Very good poem.
You would be a awsome writer...

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PostSubject: Re: Nothing Left 2!!   Sun Jan 04, 2009 9:43 pm

Thanks, I have some ideas for a novel.
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PostSubject: Re: Nothing Left 2!!   Sun Jan 11, 2009 2:26 pm

Lol, some parts were funny.

Good job.
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PostSubject: Re: Nothing Left 2!!   Sun Jan 11, 2009 5:47 pm

Brilliant! lol
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PostSubject: Re: Nothing Left 2!!   Sun Jan 11, 2009 11:57 pm

Thank you, and Jake, which parts were humored you?
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