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Jyo Grasshopper
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| Subject: Nothing Left 2!! Fri Jan 02, 2009 6:03 pm | |
| This is the second and last part of the story. This takes place a few years ago after the incident when someone framed him. The guy talking is the person who was intentionally framed. The fellow he is speaking to is the man who framed him. Again, I wrote this many years ago. Btw, there is minor cussing invovled, just a heads up.
Nothing Left 2
Do you remember me, because I remember you
If I had just one penny, I would’ve looked to sue
You don’t even know the pain that I’ve gone through
All the pain you have caused, and my rage is about due
Now that we are both familiar with that day
I have a lot on my mind I want to say
Hoping to bounce back on the great life of high pay
But nothing would ever go my way
Life used to be appreciated; it was at its best
All the weight from my childhood was lifted off my chest
Now I am all alone, an egg that fell off its nest
And I’m stuck with the druggies, smokin pot and using meth
I look for food; look for any scraps I can find
Or took food that was not even mine
I don’t got no money, not even a dime
I have no where to go, not even one sign
I looked for any job, but nothing in sight
I can’t even think, and forgot how to write
People laughing at me when the day is bright
Livin In the cold that I can hardly bare at night
I never knew life could have been this hard
Looken at the year after this whole thing started
All I wanted was to help you look towards the stars
But I ended up in that cell looken at those god damn bars
I miss my family and my wife’s smile
I want them back in my life but I know their in denial
I miss my life, I was ridin in style
But now I can’t cause I have a criminal file
Maybe my life is going through a phase
Trying to get through this confusing maze
Got to get up off my feet and stop playing these games
Just like I have been for the past few days
Maybe my life has always been sore
Thinking of the past, I always wanted more
People delivering shit right to my door
Livin like a star in the mid-ocean floor
I know our lives were never the same
I used to live every day in fame
Flying first class in one of them high powered planes
Never had to suffer any kind of pain
How is it that my life has turned around
Livin in the streets of a small empty town
It might not look as bad as it sounds
But look when its pouring and the thunder pounds
My life is empty, my soul has been devoured
As my body crumbles, and my evil is empowered
All because of you….you fuckin coward
But why would you care, your life has not shattered
Now I spend every day with agonizing pain
Yankin shards of glass right out of my veins
Pealing skin that has already been slain
And those damn insects just drivin me insane Now its time to go to my destiny Knowing that I tried and this was meant to be My grave will not even get one bit of respect
But my life is nothing, I have nothing left.
Yeah, the ending is horrible. XD | |
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Avatarsyd Pink Bender
Number of posts : 573 Age : 28 Username Title : Mistress Of All 4 Elements! Points : Warnings : Strikes : Contribution to the Site : Extra Ranks : User of the week : Registration date : 2008-11-07
| Subject: Re: Nothing Left 2!! Fri Jan 02, 2009 6:18 pm | |
| Wow, another great part. I cried at this one too. But, wow. I'm just like...well I'm kinda lost for words. Lol. But...WOW! Wowza, gosh, this like belongs like in a frame or something! Like WOW! Like totally needs to be in a book or something. Kinda frazzled because of the awe >.< | |
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Jyo Grasshopper
Number of posts : 58 Points : Warnings : Strikes : Contribution to the Site : Extra Ranks : User of the week : Registration date : 2008-12-06
| Subject: Re: Nothing Left 2!! Fri Jan 02, 2009 6:21 pm | |
| Thank you avatar, I really do not know why I did not publish the story. I am glad you really enjoyed it. I am in awe from your response XD | |
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BN The Dark Mask
Number of posts : 282 Age : 27 Username Title : Comic Party President Points : Warnings : Strikes : Contribution to the Site : Extra Ranks : User of the week : Registration date : 2008-12-16
| Subject: Re: Nothing Left 2!! Fri Jan 02, 2009 7:05 pm | |
| Ah, beautifully written, and very powerful. Don't forget to enter it in a contest to win lots of money! P.S. Avatar you were just talking like me when we were at Edis. =p | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: Nothing Left 2!! Fri Jan 02, 2009 7:25 pm | |
| Very good. I loved it. It's like I was seeing what was happening. If I could rate this, it would be 100/10. Again, very nice job. |
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Jyo Grasshopper
Number of posts : 58 Points : Warnings : Strikes : Contribution to the Site : Extra Ranks : User of the week : Registration date : 2008-12-06
| Subject: Re: Nothing Left 2!! Fri Jan 02, 2009 10:04 pm | |
| Thank you everyone and there are story contests here? | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: Nothing Left 2!! Sat Jan 03, 2009 12:37 am | |
| I don't think so, but, that would be a fantastic idea. |
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Jyo Grasshopper
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| Subject: Re: Nothing Left 2!! Sat Jan 03, 2009 12:41 am | |
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Ekat Pink Bender
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| Subject: Re: Nothing Left 2!! Sat Jan 03, 2009 9:17 am | |
| awesomely written jyo, did it take a lot of time? | |
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Alyssa The Universe Mask
Number of posts : 723 Age : 25 Username Title : The Musically Gifted Points : Warnings : Strikes : Contribution to the Site : Extra Ranks : User of the week : Registration date : 2008-12-03
| Subject: Re: Nothing Left 2!! Sat Jan 03, 2009 10:48 am | |
| omg! that was so good! are you gonna do another one. i rarely cry during movies and poems and stories but this accually almost made me cry! | |
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Jyo Grasshopper
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| Subject: Re: Nothing Left 2!! Sat Jan 03, 2009 10:59 am | |
| haha cool, and thanks, and I dont think there will be another, I mean he dies. | |
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Pie Yellow Swordsmaster
Number of posts : 1152 Age : 26 Username Title : The rightful king of all that is pie Points : Warnings : Strikes : Contribution to the Site : Extra Ranks : User of the week : Registration date : 2008-10-13
| Subject: Re: Nothing Left 2!! Sat Jan 03, 2009 5:29 pm | |
| Great poem! I feel bad for the person in the poem, nobody will help the guy. | |
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Salander1234 Bender
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| Subject: Re: Nothing Left 2!! Sun Jan 04, 2009 10:15 am | |
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Jyo Grasshopper
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| Subject: Re: Nothing Left 2!! Sun Jan 04, 2009 9:07 pm | |
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Tensai_Adam Red Kung-Fu Master
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| Subject: Re: Nothing Left 2!! Sun Jan 04, 2009 9:27 pm | |
| Very good poem. You would be a awsome writer... | |
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Jyo Grasshopper
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| Subject: Re: Nothing Left 2!! Sun Jan 04, 2009 9:43 pm | |
| Thanks, I have some ideas for a novel. | |
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JakeSteel Pink Bender
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| Subject: Re: Nothing Left 2!! Sun Jan 11, 2009 2:26 pm | |
| Lol, some parts were funny.
Good job. | |
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King of Things Bender
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| Subject: Re: Nothing Left 2!! Sun Jan 11, 2009 5:47 pm | |
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Jyo Grasshopper
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| Subject: Re: Nothing Left 2!! Sun Jan 11, 2009 11:57 pm | |
| Thank you, and Jake, which parts were humored you? | |
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