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PostSubject: Two Poems   Wed Dec 31, 2008 11:32 pm

Here's a poem I made last year for the heck of it.


An Owl Goes Hunting

I hear a vibration-
A mere heartbeat thats all
I follow the sound
Flying fast, but silent
Where was it going?
When would it stop?
Closer and closer
Inches away, and finally
I sink my talons into my prey.

Here's another.

An Owl Awaits the Night

Here I am, a lonely owl
Perched on a branch, for many hours
I await the sun's disappearance
Watching the colors fade the sky
How much longer will it take?
I see the sun's reflection shining off the lake
As soon as a day ends,
Yet a new day begins.

I made them a year ago, so they're pretty bad...
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PostSubject: Re: Two Poems   Thu Jan 01, 2009 5:18 am

Not bad. I like the first one the best. Very Happy

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PostSubject: Re: Two Poems   Thu Jan 01, 2009 9:44 am

Not bad. Not bad at all, but it's something missing...
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PostSubject: Re: Two Poems   Thu Jan 01, 2009 9:50 am

I prefer the first one mah favorite. But, both were good.
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PostSubject: Re: Two Poems   Thu Jan 01, 2009 10:25 am

no they're really good
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PostSubject: Re: Two Poems   Thu Jan 01, 2009 10:37 am

Pretty good. Short though.
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