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 | | Subject: The Haunted House Tue Dec 16, 2008 2:38 pm | |
| another one of my real life stories enjoy !
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The Haunted House
So as my last story told my neighbor was a psyco and went to an insane assylum... about 2 years later he came back and wanted to murder me. I was 18 at this time and did not believe in ghosts till this day May 15, 2006. I went to his house when I thought he was not there. So I went to his bedroom and looked at some pictures. Then there was this giant carving of an indian holding 2 hatchets. I looked at it for awhile then went out of the bedroom and into the basement. I saw a couple of rats in there the lights suddenly turned on by themselves. I heard footsteps and said "is anyone there, hello ?" Then I saw a bloody hook hanging from the ceiling by a string. I shoved it aside and went upstairs. I tried to get out but the door was locked. He keeps his key in his bathroom at all times I went in and got the key, then I sceamed. The bathtub was full of blood. I`m like this guy is literally trying to murder me. I opened the door to the bedroom the Indian was right in front of the door. I sreamed "OH MY GOD i`M GOING TO DIE !!!" Then I saw something moving under the covers I lifted them with quarts of sweat dripping off of me. "Phew" I said "It was only his cat Fluffy was her name. I heard a noise in the basement I went down the lights suddenly turned off. I heard the noise and right in front of me was him , with a chainsaw. I screamed really loud and ran to the door put the key in and called the cops. He went back to the insane assylum and I asked the people who worked there a couple of questions. Then they gave me a complete rundown. They said he was trying to scare you not kill you. "WHAT ???" I said. They said "you see he moved the indian guy, he flickered the lights, the hook was when he used to go whale hunting, and the chainsaw had no chain. I said "what about the bathtub, it was full of blood." "That wasn`t blood it was ketchup he said." wow all that for a simple scare. Then he stared at me weird. I told my mother eveything and she believed me. That was the last time I ever saw my neighbor again.
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| | Subject: Re: The Haunted House Tue Dec 16, 2008 5:03 pm | |
| Wow.
You seriously like to break rules dont you? But i would probably be curious to if the dude was in a insane asylum.
Nice story.. again.
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| | Subject: Re: The Haunted House Tue Dec 16, 2008 5:07 pm | |
| Umm...I would think a college student could write a bit...better than this..?
(No offence)
Your story was a bit hard to follow, due to the missing periods and what not. I would also think that you, of all people, would bump up your vocabulary. I mean, you could at least describe what the hook REALLY looked like. Or show your fear of the cold basement or something... |
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Dark Samus
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| | Subject: Re: The Haunted House Tue Dec 16, 2008 5:08 pm | |
| - dakfire wrote:
- Wow.
You seriously like to break rules dont you? But i would probably be curious to if the dude was in a insane asylum.
Nice story.. again.
what do you mean break the rules ? |
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| | Subject: Re: The Haunted House Tue Dec 16, 2008 5:26 pm | |
| Breaking into someones house..
How could you not know thats something you shouldnt do?
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