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PostSubject: Rise Of The Living Dead Chapter 2: Rise From Blood   Sun Dec 14, 2008 10:10 am

Ander grabed his pocket knife. Slowly cutting into the chest of the doll."What the..." That was all he could say before the bottom drawer of the dresser opened. Somehow the doll was on the ground. As he bent down to pick it up when he noticed it was bleeding. "But wait." He said. "How am I sure this is the dolls blood? Or could it just be...No..." He opened the drawer with his Amber in it. "No. It can't be." He said checking her pulse. It was beating.

The next thing he knew he was on the ground.Bleeding. As he lay on his death groung he notice something...Something in the shape of a person...
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PostSubject: Re: Rise Of The Living Dead Chapter 2: Rise From Blood   Sun Dec 14, 2008 10:22 am

Not bad...a bit...short.
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PostSubject: Re: Rise Of The Living Dead Chapter 2: Rise From Blood   Sun Dec 14, 2008 12:42 pm

cool
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PostSubject: Re: Rise Of The Living Dead Chapter 2: Rise From Blood   Sun Dec 14, 2008 1:10 pm

Agreed w/ Avatar
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PostSubject: Re: Rise Of The Living Dead Chapter 2: Rise From Blood   Sun Dec 14, 2008 10:06 pm

Make it longer. Thats the size of a prologue.
Good story so far.

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PostSubject: Re: Rise Of The Living Dead Chapter 2: Rise From Blood   Mon Dec 15, 2008 5:48 pm

I make short things.
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PostSubject: Re: Rise Of The Living Dead Chapter 2: Rise From Blood   Mon Dec 15, 2008 5:50 pm

same as avatar aswell
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