another song (don't worry about the last one i just rushed! I took my time on this one)

I'll never miss you
By alyrox2009
Style: Soft rock Instruments: Chorus: Main instruments: acoustic guitar Other verses: Piano/keyboard Other: Drum set

Why... do u gotta get so mad at me... even though i didn't do anything... at all?
why... do u gotta walk away? i've always wanted u to stay... until right now?
why... are my thoughts so sad? You make me mad... i'm so depressed. So depressed...

(chorus)
I can't even breathe...
You've suffocated me...
I wanted you to see...
The sadness in me.
Don't come back to me...
I can't even think. You see?
I wanted you to see...
I've got so little left in me.
I'll never miss you. You see?

Now... I wanna run away... I never want to stay... anymore.
Now... I've noticed how... you really didn't care about me... at all.
Now... I can't sleep at night... I wake up in the middle... of the night. I can see...

(chorus)
I can't even breathe...
You've suffocated me...
I wanted you to see...
The sadness in me.
Don't come back to me...
I can't even think. You see?
I wanted you to see...
I've got so little left in me.
I'll never miss you. You see?

I am so innocent... you're so guilty.
You go off into the night.
You've stole all my money... I'm so broke you see.
my momma' can't even afford to take care of herself.
Why'd you go away... i shouldn't of wanted you to stay.
'Cause now I know all the answers...

(chorus)
I can't even breathe...
You've suffocated me...
I wanted you to see...
The sadness in me.
Don't come back to me...
I can't even think. You see?
I wanted you to see...
I've got so little left in me.
I'll never miss you. You see?

I can't even breathe...
You've suffocated me...
I wanted you to see...
The sadness in me.
Don't come back to me...
I can't even think. You see?
I wanted you to see...
I've got so little left in me.
I'll never miss you. You see?

I'll never miss you...

Quote :

I can't even breathe...
You've suffocated me...
I wanted you to see...
The sadness in me.
Don't come back to me...
I can't even think. You see?
I wanted you to see...
I've got so little left in me.
I'll never miss you. You see?

Rhyming in every line is not a song. XD

Rikazu wrote:

Rhyming in every line is not a song. XD

I have to agree xD

i'm not trying to rhyme in every line i didn't even know it rhymed in every line until just now! DONT JUDGE ME

it sounds like a rap song but is it suppost to be a emotional one?

I need a tune, this sukz0rz

make up ur own tune

*sings along to Never Gonna Give You Up*

It doesn't fit, this suckz0rz

Same as CB

i reckon, (even though some are poor) you should get some published.

Mattie wrote:

i reckon, (even though some are poor) you should get some published.

o.O

Er, Thats Crazy. Too erm..., omblish.

Mattie wrote:

i reckon, (even though some are poor) you should get some published.

seriously?

Wow, that's pretty good for a 11 year old.

Your being serious right Chip?

Maybe...

Chipicles wrote:

Maybe...

I think you're lying.
Well, I would hope you are :/

What kinda music do you listen to Chip..

70's music. Bands that a normal teenager wouldn't know about.

u know...

guys sometimes ya judge my music to hard...

if ya acually had the tune i made up and the acual music and everything ya would like it....

if u like rock music...

Chipicles wrote:

70's music. Bands that a normal teenager wouldn't know about.

Name some bands then.

Powned.
xD

NormalNoob wrote:

Powned.
xD

who was?

Melissa wrote:
Name some bands then.

OK, let's see...

Allman Brothers (60's-70's)
Grateful Dead (70's-90's
The Monkees (60's)
Deep Purple (70's-80's)
Chuck Berry (50's)
Lynyrd Skynyrd (70's -80's)

Those are some of them.

Chipicles wrote:

Melissa wrote:
Name some bands then.

OK, let's see...

Allman Brothers (60's-70's)
Grateful Dead (70's-90's
The Monkees (60's)
Deep Purple (70's-80's)
Chuck Berry (50's)
Lynyrd Skynyrd (70's -80's)

Those are some of them.

I thought you said 70's bands....but nice choices. Except for Skynyrd in the 80's. Revolting.