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PostSubject: another song (don't worry about the last one i just rushed! I took my time on this one)   Sun Apr 26, 2009 4:27 pm

I'll never miss you
By alyrox2009
Style: Soft rock Instruments: Chorus: Main instruments: acoustic guitar Other verses: Piano/keyboard Other: Drum set

Why... do u gotta get so mad at me... even though i didn't do anything... at all?
why... do u gotta walk away? i've always wanted u to stay... until right now?
why... are my thoughts so sad? You make me mad... i'm so depressed. So depressed...

(chorus)
I can't even breathe...
You've suffocated me...
I wanted you to see...
The sadness in me.
Don't come back to me...
I can't even think. You see?
I wanted you to see...
I've got so little left in me.
I'll never miss you. You see?

Now... I wanna run away... I never want to stay... anymore.
Now... I've noticed how... you really didn't care about me... at all.
Now... I can't sleep at night... I wake up in the middle... of the night. I can see...

(chorus)
I can't even breathe...
You've suffocated me...
I wanted you to see...
The sadness in me.
Don't come back to me...
I can't even think. You see?
I wanted you to see...
I've got so little left in me.
I'll never miss you. You see?

I am so innocent... you're so guilty.
You go off into the night.
You've stole all my money... I'm so broke you see.
my momma' can't even afford to take care of herself.
Why'd you go away... i shouldn't of wanted you to stay.
'Cause now I know all the answers...

(chorus)
I can't even breathe...
You've suffocated me...
I wanted you to see...
The sadness in me.
Don't come back to me...
I can't even think. You see?
I wanted you to see...
I've got so little left in me.
I'll never miss you. You see?

I can't even breathe...
You've suffocated me...
I wanted you to see...
The sadness in me.
Don't come back to me...
I can't even think. You see?
I wanted you to see...
I've got so little left in me.
I'll never miss you. You see?

I'll never miss you...
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PostSubject: Re: another song (don't worry about the last one i just rushed! I took my time on this one)   Sun Apr 26, 2009 4:42 pm

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I can't even breathe...
You've suffocated me...
I wanted you to see...
The sadness in me.
Don't come back to me...
I can't even think. You see?
I wanted you to see...
I've got so little left in me.
I'll never miss you. You see?

Rhyming in every line is not a song. XD

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PostSubject: Re: another song (don't worry about the last one i just rushed! I took my time on this one)   Sun Apr 26, 2009 6:18 pm

Rikazu wrote:

Rhyming in every line is not a song. XD

I have to agree xD
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PostSubject: Re: another song (don't worry about the last one i just rushed! I took my time on this one)   Mon Apr 27, 2009 7:23 am

i'm not trying to rhyme in every line i didn't even know it rhymed in every line until just now! DONT JUDGE ME
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PostSubject: Re: another song (don't worry about the last one i just rushed! I took my time on this one)   Mon Apr 27, 2009 11:11 am

it sounds like a rap song but is it suppost to be a emotional one?
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PostSubject: Re: another song (don't worry about the last one i just rushed! I took my time on this one)   Mon Apr 27, 2009 11:19 am

I need a tune, this sukz0rz

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PostSubject: Re: another song (don't worry about the last one i just rushed! I took my time on this one)   Mon Apr 27, 2009 3:50 pm

make up ur own tune
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PostSubject: Re: another song (don't worry about the last one i just rushed! I took my time on this one)   Tue Apr 28, 2009 2:30 am

*sings along to Never Gonna Give You Up*

It doesn't fit, this suckz0rz

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PostSubject: Re: another song (don't worry about the last one i just rushed! I took my time on this one)   Tue Apr 28, 2009 8:53 am

Same as CB
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PostSubject: Re: another song (don't worry about the last one i just rushed! I took my time on this one)   Wed Apr 29, 2009 11:29 am

i reckon, (even though some are poor) you should get some published.
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PostSubject: Re: another song (don't worry about the last one i just rushed! I took my time on this one)   Wed Apr 29, 2009 1:50 pm

Mattie wrote:
i reckon, (even though some are poor) you should get some published.

o.O
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PostSubject: Re: another song (don't worry about the last one i just rushed! I took my time on this one)   Wed Apr 29, 2009 3:55 pm

Er, Thats Crazy. Too erm..., omblish.
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PostSubject: Re: another song (don't worry about the last one i just rushed! I took my time on this one)   Thu Apr 30, 2009 3:44 pm

Mattie wrote:
i reckon, (even though some are poor) you should get some published.


seriously?
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PostSubject: Re: another song (don't worry about the last one i just rushed! I took my time on this one)   Mon May 04, 2009 6:19 pm

Wow, that's pretty good for a 11 year old.
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PostSubject: Re: another song (don't worry about the last one i just rushed! I took my time on this one)   Mon May 04, 2009 6:21 pm

Your being serious right Chip?
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PostSubject: Re: another song (don't worry about the last one i just rushed! I took my time on this one)   Mon May 04, 2009 6:34 pm

Maybe... Smile
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PostSubject: Re: another song (don't worry about the last one i just rushed! I took my time on this one)   Mon May 04, 2009 6:38 pm

Chipicles wrote:
Maybe... Smile


I think you're lying.
Well, I would hope you are :/
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PostSubject: Re: another song (don't worry about the last one i just rushed! I took my time on this one)   Mon May 04, 2009 6:41 pm

What kinda music do you listen to Chip..
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PostSubject: Re: another song (don't worry about the last one i just rushed! I took my time on this one)   Mon May 04, 2009 6:49 pm

70's music. Bands that a normal teenager wouldn't know about. Smile
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PostSubject: Re: another song (don't worry about the last one i just rushed! I took my time on this one)   Mon May 04, 2009 6:51 pm

u know...

guys sometimes ya judge my music to hard...

if ya acually had the tune i made up and the acual music and everything ya would like it....

if u like rock music...
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PostSubject: Re: another song (don't worry about the last one i just rushed! I took my time on this one)   Mon May 04, 2009 6:55 pm

Chipicles wrote:
70's music. Bands that a normal teenager wouldn't know about. Smile

Name some bands then.
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PostSubject: Re: another song (don't worry about the last one i just rushed! I took my time on this one)   Mon May 04, 2009 8:05 pm

Powned.
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PostSubject: Re: another song (don't worry about the last one i just rushed! I took my time on this one)   Tue May 05, 2009 9:56 am

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Powned.
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who was?
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PostSubject: Re: another song (don't worry about the last one i just rushed! I took my time on this one)   Tue May 05, 2009 3:13 pm

Melissa wrote:
Name some bands then.

OK, let's see...

Allman Brothers (60's-70's)
Grateful Dead (70's-90's
The Monkees (60's)
Deep Purple (70's-80's)
Chuck Berry (50's)
Lynyrd Skynyrd (70's -80's)

Those are some of them.
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PostSubject: Re: another song (don't worry about the last one i just rushed! I took my time on this one)   Tue May 05, 2009 7:37 pm

Chipicles wrote:
Melissa wrote:
Name some bands then.

OK, let's see...

Allman Brothers (60's-70's)
Grateful Dead (70's-90's
The Monkees (60's)
Deep Purple (70's-80's)
Chuck Berry (50's)
Lynyrd Skynyrd (70's -80's)

Those are some of them.

I thought you said 70's bands....but nice choices. Except for Skynyrd in the 80's. Revolting.
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